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(01-09-2019, 02:41 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?

I wouldnt hire him. 1dunno1

Guest seems to be doing quite fine with his short film story according to everyone else who watched it.
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#22
(01-09-2019, 02:58 PM)Frigg Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Everyone is a God Damned critic.

Troll2

Chuckle
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#23
(01-09-2019, 03:02 PM)Nekro Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:41 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote: The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?

I wouldnt hire him. 1dunno1

Guest seems to be doing quite fine with his short film story according to everyone else who watched it.

Chuckle I was being an unevolved Cancer... Chuckle
----

Dear Winter,
I am breaking up with you.
I think it is time I start seeing other seasons.

p.s. Summer is hotter than you
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#24
(01-09-2019, 03:31 AM)Guest Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:24 AM)Guest Wrote: Thank you x was lots of work NOSAINT xx

man lost my log in details again ,please enjoy our small film thanks for watching . Heartflowers

How long does it take, start to finish, with a piece like that?

Seems like a fair amount of time and money.

Think for yourself
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#25
(01-09-2019, 03:03 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:02 PM)Nekro Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:41 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote: Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?

I wouldnt hire him. 1dunno1

Guest seems to be doing quite fine with his short film story according to everyone else who watched it.

Chuckle I was being an unevolved Cancer... Chuckle

Lmao
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#26
(01-09-2019, 02:41 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?

Of course they should hire me. I've read enough books and seen enough films to be called an expert on this stuff.

You actually thought that my writing was non-fiction in those stories
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#27
(01-09-2019, 03:04 PM)Frigg Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:31 AM)Guest Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:24 AM)Guest Wrote: Thank you x was lots of work NOSAINT xx

man lost my log in details again ,please enjoy our small film thanks for watching . Heartflowers

How long does it take, start to finish, with a piece like that?

Seems like a fair amount of time and money.

You can throw money at garbage but it isn't going to win any awards.
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#28
(01-09-2019, 03:25 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:04 PM)Frigg Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:31 AM)Guest Wrote: man lost my log in details again ,please enjoy our small film thanks for watching . Heartflowers

How long does it take, start to finish, with a piece like that?

Seems like a fair amount of time and money.

You can throw money at garbage but it isn't going to win any awards.

So what if he doesnt win any awards. He was just looking for some support.
You seem to just go out of your way to criticize.
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#29
(01-09-2019, 03:11 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:41 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote: The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?

Of course they should hire me. I've read enough books and seen enough films to be called an expert on this stuff.

You actually thought that my writing was non-fiction in those stories

I didn't know what to think about your thread...it was weird.

It didn't help that you didn't offer an introduction or a summation as to why you were posting those strange "I am missing" intros.
----

Dear Winter,
I am breaking up with you.
I think it is time I start seeing other seasons.

p.s. Summer is hotter than you
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#30
(01-09-2019, 03:36 PM)Nekro Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:25 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:04 PM)Frigg Wrote: How long does it take, start to finish, with a piece like that?

Seems like a fair amount of time and money.

You can throw money at garbage but it isn't going to win any awards.

So what if he doesnt win any awards. He was just looking for some support.
You seem to just go out of your way to criticize.

Yeah3

Strike one Cracker.

I see you running right back to your old ways... Naughty naughty.

Think for yourself
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