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#11
(01-09-2019, 03:31 AM)Guest Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 03:24 AM)Guest Wrote: Thank you x was lots of work NOSAINT xx

man lost my log in details again ,please enjoy our small film thanks for watching . Heartflowers

@NOSAINT I loved it.

@T-Dub @Mmmkay_Ultra @Angry Red Man NoSaint lost his log in details. Just wondered if you could help. 1dunno1
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#12
Very well done!

So was he sent back to earth because the gate guards don't want us exploring to far past our prison/plane limitations?
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Dear Winter,
I am breaking up with you.
I think it is time I start seeing other seasons.

p.s. Summer is hotter than you
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"I don't know everything, I know just enough to know that I know nothing - which is just a little more than those who think they know anything!"

http://www.maddeningnews.com/forum01
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#14
Impressive. I enjoyed that as well. Thank you
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#15
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10
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#16
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Maybe he can hire you?

I read your strange thread with no explanation or conclusion, just random introductions to fictional missing people, very well described missing people I might add...wait...that was fiction right?
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Dear Winter,
I am breaking up with you.
I think it is time I start seeing other seasons.

p.s. Summer is hotter than you
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#17
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


I love a happy ending... Pass me a tissue and stop teasing Tito

Lmao

That was really well done. Better than a lot of the big budget sci fi stuff.

It left you wanting to know more... That is good "film"

Think for yourself
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#18
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

Everyone is a God Damned critic.

Troll2

Think for yourself
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#19
(01-09-2019, 02:37 PM)Cracker Jack Wrote:
(01-09-2019, 02:34 AM)Guest Wrote: Enjoy  please like our short film.


The visuals and directing was good but god who was your writer for this film. I understand it was a short but it was also short. Stretching out an already short story. In fact it seems the writer/s involved with this film had no story at all to tell. I fell uninterested by the 3 minute mark then fast forward to the ending and it was still boring nor did I understand if there was a plot line at all. Plus none of the actors fit. The wife is obviously Indian or brown. But the kid looks like white bread which don't make any sense. Also every time they showed a far shot of the guy siting in the spaceship. The lighting behind him didn't match the atmosphere.

Find better writers.

2/10

you must be a huge hit at parties too Eyeroll
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#20
(01-09-2019, 12:16 PM)Deplorably Nameless Wrote: Very well done!

So was he sent back to earth because the gate guards don't want us exploring to far past our prison/plane limitations?

They didn't want us monkeying around with Space Time... yet. The pilot was unharmed.

Think for yourself
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